Sketches and Script Sketches

Back in December in Florida, I traded "sketches" with Brad Meltzer. Neither one was a traditional sketch. For my sketch, Brad asked me to hand draw this portion of JLA#7 on the same sheet as the rest of the cover. Brad had purchased my part of the cover from me, and the sheet the other two cover artists had done their sections on. He wanted it all on one sheet.
With Brad's permission I wanted to improve the drawing a bit. I'm not going to go into technical detail about what I didn't like, but I will show you the new unpublished version.

Here's some closeup shots, with the original first:


And here's the version for Brad's collection:


Okay, I was gonna post the script sketch but I can't find the JPEG file now. It's late and I'll try to post it later, along with some other sketches I collected for Lowell and Mike, my friends who can't get to cons very often,

Gene